We went for a class trip last week
Sally was absent on that day.
Sally went out with her boyfriend to another place.
Her boyfriend is very cute.
The weather is very hot.
They decided to go to the beach.
Sally play volleyball with his boyfriend on the beach.
We saw Sally and her boyfriend on the beach.
We join them for volleyball.
Suddenly, Sally hurt her leg.
They saw the sign of tsunami.
Then He Smile And Walk Away
**The teacher's comment was: The story was REALLY bad, I will fail this composition if I'm the examiner.
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